Wednesday, March 4, 2026

In This New Magic(An Acrostic Sonnet With Anadiplosis) Comments

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Inside your thoughts there is nothing new,
Nothing new to give the spark!
The spark that would bring a different hue!
Hue defined to fight in the dark!
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Avik DattaGupta
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Kim Barney 05 March 2026

Very nice except for line four --- the first letter doesn't fit. I'm sure you can fix it.

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Avik DattaGupta 11 March 2026

Thanks Kim for letting me know about my slip up.I have fixed the 4th line.

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