In transit Poem by Kapka Kassabova

In transit

Rating: 4.7


There is a field of frozen mud,
and in the middle, a pear tree
that bears fruit, still.
Under the tree - an old man
in a borrowed jacket, with a plastic bag.
The mud has embraced his movements.
The others have gone on with their children.
The border is ten steps away.

Monday, March 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: children,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohanan Viswambharan Nair 16 November 2017

In the field of frozen mud, there is a hope in the form of a lone pear tree and under its shade a man waiting with hope of a transit. All left there, but something delays his transit, Like that tree which is still bearing fruit in the frozen land, he is bearing fruits of hope for a transit to a place beyond the border which is ten steps away, beautiful. thanks

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Ratnakar Mandlik 31 March 2017

The pitiable condition of the old man during transit of a group, of may be refugees, adroitly portrayed.

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Fabrizio Frosini 31 March 2017

a remarkable poem on the plight of refugees

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Rajnish Manga 31 March 2017

May be this relates to a war ravaged place where people have fled to safer places, even across the borders. Very poignant picture created with words. Thanks, KK.

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