Tuesday, July 15, 2008

In Your Dad's Spanglish Comments

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Tuck my waist under some dark, steady hand
because so far tonight isn't enough.
You're sloppy drunk again,
speaking
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Delilah Miller
chaos Cigarettes Dad smoking
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Ivan Donn Carswell 01 August 2008

Delilah, the subtle shift between strophes is clever, more than just suggested mood movement. Imagery is almost musical and aptly shaped to dance rythmns. A very enjoyable poem. Rgds, Ivan

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Delilah Miller

Delilah Miller

San Diego
Delilah Miller
Delilah Miller
San Diego
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