just a girl in capable of holding in fears
but a girl very capable of letting go tears
she hides from others so they won't know
all of that place is she wishes she could go
Only fooled by everyone who tries
Not all the time but everyday she cries
She only hides her fears when people are alive
Sometimes she wishes she wasn't alive
She cries when she stops to think and stare
She only cries because she knows their there
Her thoughts always haUnt her
Telling her she's bad
She only starts to cry
again because she misses good times she's had
But life knocks her down
And she won't come back
She's a lone wolf whose lost her pack
Fantastic poem, ... Good rhyme scheme, ... Just, you've put the reader in so much confusion that we dont really know the state of the girl, if she's dead or..... Maybe u should look into that, ... ~TT~
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I would like to translate this poem
shes just a girl whos tired of reliving her past she hates the things shes done in the past but she wont fix em