Indomitable Poem by Ana Rose Trazo

Indomitable

Rating: 5.0


I am covered with the blanket of dullness
That made my world be shrouded with darkness
I thank God whatever his plans for me
For no one could dominate my soul but He.

I have faced a lot of challenges
But I never cried hard nor pulled back at the edge.
Under the pressure that life gave,
I still have the will to be brave.

In this world of chaos and miseries,
Can only see the horror of truth and mysteries.
And though time gives me threat
It will never hold me out of breath.

It is not about the rules that were set
Nor what consequences we may get
For I can always be what I desired to be
And no one can control my life but me.

Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: struggle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a paraphrase of the poem invictus
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2015

Facing challenges in this world at modern time is wonderful definitely. Mysteries go beyond breath. Very wise and interesting sharing...10

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success