Industrial Skylife Poem by Jesse Russell

Industrial Skylife



crows
long and slender
pencil thin
fly over my rooftop
and unfold again.

as they dive
remaining entwined,
their wings
brush the early branches
of spring.

mountains of pink smoke
above peppered black murder
give this mourning
a terminating glow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashley S 14 June 2007

Wow, you write extremely well for somone so young. I love reading poetry with such a fresh outlook to it. Very clean lines, sharp images, excellent poem, Jesse. Good work!

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Porter Daryl 14 June 2007

many writers strive to write this clear and straight forward.

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