INFERNO.
Beside a lonely hamlet a dog is barking, chained to a post in a barren field. It is an evening time. The sky is red, strewn with streaks of blood of the dying day. The dog lets out a howl, born out of despair and futility of his life.
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Dear friend, you have written a story rather than a poem. Why don't you try your hand at short story writing? You will find more success.....!