Infinity Poem by Courtney Chapman

Infinity



You, are why I'll never love again
They, will hurt me till the end
We, will forever be hated
I, have hurt so many
He, has taken my sanity
She, never listened
It, will torment forever
Everybody, will pay for what they did to each other.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Foster Blaine 27 September 2006

suggestion: omit all the commas (after you, they, we, i etc.) - your point will still be received. all this superfluous punctuation messes up the flow. foster

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