Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Innate Desires Comments

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Mirages of life form before me,
creating a mystic formula into
which I carefully step.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Bri Edwards 26 November 2013

RoseAnn, i read a couple of your thoughtful comments after the works of a couple of poets tonight. i then read Innate Desires. i was having trouble wading through it, short as it is. so i condensed it to what might be the basics. i still don't really understand it, but thanks for sharing. it was interesting. :) my condensation: Innate Desires Into a mystic formula i carefully step, searching for words through imagination, following an innate desire hiding deeply inside me. yes, i now see some similarity to what adeline foster wrote, using many more words.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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