Friday, March 2, 2012

Innocence Comments

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When I saw her, I felt something,
her face was a Moon, shining,

her hands lay inert, beckoning,
my heart was just overwhelming
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Vishnu Sampoorn
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Ramesh Rai 18 October 2014

Oh! so sad but beautiful expression. Keep writing.

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