Innocence, Lost. Comments

I think you skillfully characterize 'her', whether she is yourself of someone else. The picture of disillusionment is well-sketched. (And I pray 'she' will some day find the 'new innocence' that one poet, William Blake, said is on the other side of disillusionment.)

Sarai, this is a beautiful poem. Well writtten. By the way, your name sounds familiar, are you from Eritrea or Ethiopia? Peace