Innocent Perception Comments

Childhood memories deserve a second read. Thanks again Dominic and another full score. And keep retaining said imagination too. And battle any life denying system or systems.

Thanks Shaun. Essentially, I was trying to compose something child - like (rather than childish..there is a great difference) . Consequently, it is accompanied by a child's vivid painting. I think it's important to retain one's imagination, as in many cases, it seems to fade away as we grow older and unfortunately have to conform to ostensibly life denying systems.

A neat and nicely encapsulated poem displaying innocent childhood memories which are now colourfully recalled and reflected on. Neat and precise Dominic and great to read, a full score and take care and thanks for sharing too.