Insane Poem by sapphire santiago

Insane



on the outside my eyes are saying im fine
on the inside im screaming and going outta my mind
the stress jus builds miraculously to an impossible level
the excruciating pain is unbelievable
no doubt its the work of a devil
my tears over flow to an extent of no other
but for some reason i jus cant stop it im not even goin to bother
the pain and agony stays with me forever
the pain and agony just cant leave me never
part of me is lost into a black abyss
my pain and suffering is at a high risk
confusion and depression just runs threw my body like the blood running threw my veins
im so close from going insane
my sanity is decreasing massively
insanity flows threw me drastically
id try to ask the mystical man up above for some guidence
but the mixture of me and him is a deadly alliance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 July 2009

Dear Sapphire, your poem really touched me, but I must honestly tell you that there is no more perfect blind than the one that do not want to see...please, let him go, there is another one better on his way, believe me, I learned my lesson the hard and painful way, if you do not break away from him, I just have to say that you successfully became his shadow....Good luck, and love, Romeo

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