Insecure: More That What I'D Thought I'D Be Poem by Cleo Blue

Insecure: More That What I'D Thought I'D Be

Rating: 4.0


I was more scared
Than i thought i'd be
Scared you wouldn't be
able to love me
Or accept me and what you thought of me
Or not see what you wanted to see

I was more careful that i thought i'd be
Tiptoeing around my feelings
Like an angel walking on a cloud
Adding a touch of innocence to everything they see

I was more affected by you than i thought i'd be
More than i needed to be
Don't you see?

I was more in love with you
than i thought i'd be
More that i needed to be
More that i wanted to be

I was more happy then i'll ever be
Even if all i have left
are memories of you and me

Im more relieved
then i'll ever be
That you actually
Fell in love
With the insecure me

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Basically this is about an insecure person [maybe i wrote it about myself maybe i didn't 8P/; P] Eho is surprised that someone actually fel in love with her..
CONTEST THINGY TIME!
So yea Step one: Pm me about my poems or what u think of me. Step 2: At the end of your pm describe the poem you want [which means a title, maybe a word or phrase you want me to build it around, or the feel or emotion you want to feel when reading it] Step three: Wait for me to respond i will try to respond bsck 2 u even if you werent in the first ten Step 3 and 1/2: I might use your poem idea anyway if i like it [but i will still give you the dedication] And if you don't have a poem idea i'll have to guess and you might not like the poem and i'll have to make another so give me somekind of detail [anypoem idea is aloud except for innapropriate things which means if you want a cussword i'll put that in there too Step 4: Watch out for my new poems the dedication will be at the authors note so ya! Step five: Be a good sport if you who don't get one are nice i might just make you one anyway Step six: Keep pming and reviewing that might make me want to write you one even without the contest ;) 8): D 8D ^_^
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 03 January 2013

Doesn't really matter whether it's you or pure fiction, it's the portrayal and the structure that counts, and you achieved both.

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