Inside A Breathing Tomb... Comments

Deep down in our heart we all have that feeling 'not to give up.' '....posing a counter challenge the buried refused to succumb it(?) grew and grew deep down under....' These lines project an image of Viswamitra Maharshi & his Trishanku Swargam! Liked it..10

Interesting requiem of sorts to create a sort of connection to the after-life in an abstract way as if you could stretch your consciousness through time. Only poetry can make that leap. brett ackerman,9/23/2009 3: 12: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

...time consistently errs......TIME NEVER ERRS....., indira.....

and it is the tomb......the grave some times speak a lot..........