Monday, July 26, 2010

Insomnia Comments

Rating: 5.0

even the ticking of clock
is hardly audible
in that rumbling that
filled the sleepless night
...
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Pranab K Chakraborty 26 July 2010

Yoonoos peerbocus has made us experienced before with insmonia from an different uspect, here poets touch in insmonia is also the different in taste. Lines of drawing very short and materially exposed......pains are less but pictures are many. Uniquely the poets expression pulls the reader to her as..... i sit like a monument / the outline of body / absorbed by the darkness........we simply become dumb to imagine the imagery. And the awakening of day from the womb of night is visually very perfect as if insmonia marching towards the grave.. Well-written another good poem for our reading experience. Regards, 10+ pranab

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