Intense Poem by John Kipling Lewis

Intense

Rating: 2.9


Obsession can feel
like divine guidance
Every act and action
for one goal.

More intense when you
put aside everything
else and only react to
another person.

it can only last so long

your energy must give

your devotion wanes

and you crumble into dust

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 06 November 2007

I know what you are trying to say, but it isn't quite there. Maybe woking the words would help.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

3. Telly, no images.

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Deanna Victor 05 November 2007

pretty good description.

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