Ignorant Poem by John Kipling Lewis
Ignorant
endless walking
where my mind is calm
and hungry.
nothing satisfies
my appetite or curiosity.
buildings shade
a relentless sun.
i can't be the only one
walking this city
ignorant of my
destination.
4. This could work if it was approached through details and imagery. All I know about this city is that it has buildings and sun. That isn't enough. Be specific. Describe. Convey the experience.
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5/5/2024 8:12:41 PM # 1.0.0.1119
It's good but I think it needs just a little work with the words, as I do get what you are saying but a little more polish please.