endless walking
where my mind is calm
and hungry.
nothing satisfies
my appetite or curiosity.
buildings shade
a relentless sun.
i can't be the only one
walking this city
ignorant of my
destination.
4. This could work if it was approached through details and imagery. All I know about this city is that it has buildings and sun. That isn't enough. Be specific. Describe. Convey the experience.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's good but I think it needs just a little work with the words, as I do get what you are saying but a little more polish please.