Monday, October 25, 2010

Intensity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes we meet someone
and our world spirals around.
Taking us to places, we should not go,
making us feel more
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David Harris
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Pranab K Chakraborty 25 October 2010

Before the next daybreak, / we both know that you will be gone / never to meet again. The reality. Crude reality of the time. Just the age suffers from synthetic relation of not achieving any sunrise in life. Beautiful illustration...lucid and true to the facts. We know but can't restrain ourselves to lie under the guillotine. Good poem............10+++++ Regards, pranab

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