Open up your eye and you can see
from my writing you can see me
and who I am
some time I fall for the lie of money
but it's really about my fam
many time befor I fail but can see success is what I am
a house for my family is my plan, I do it for them cuz I'm the man
this is what I only tell few cuz most are agaist my plans
people tell my stuff like forget the furture and stay at where I am
I'm a take one step at a time, to get to my dream
right now thanks for listen to me
just know you can do any thing!
Just go for your dreams!
Peace
Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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nice, , never ever lose sight, its easy to look at others n think you know whats best........but walking the path of your own dreams well theres a challange!