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A good start with a nice poem, Poetic Jae. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

be well-assured! you ARE worth more than dirt! ! ! i think you are at least worth pebbles! but dirt (soil) is necessary for humans to live i believe, so it is not totally bad to be just worth dirt! a suggestion from bri: Especially since each line begins with a capital letter, punctuation of sentences would make reading the poem easier (at least for me) . but, ...another for MyPoemList. bri ;)

Welcome to this august forum, My Dear Friend, This one from you is a study in human behaviour. Thanks. I swear I'm worth / More than the dirt I'm treated as / Why's it hurt / So bad