Sunday, February 27, 2005

Invisible Comments

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I see you,
do you see me,
the ugliness that has consumed me,
taken over the beauty that I used to be?
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David Lomenick
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***** ********* 30 October 2005

Hi David, it is so annoying be ignored.15th Line 'through' not threw. I am a crap speller too by the way! lol I would give them a taste of their own medicine, but I am a pushover. All the best Tai

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