David Lomenick


Invisible - Poem by David Lomenick

I see you,
do you see me,
the ugliness that has consumed me,
taken over the beauty that I used to be?
You walk past me,
I say hi,
but you ignore me,
walk right past me.
All day I try to get you to notice my gesture to you,
but nothing will do.
I call out your name,
but I choke on the words.
I don't understand,
you look right at me everyday,
I wave but you see right through me,
what do I have to do to get you to notice me,
jump off a bridge?
I see you,
do you see me,
the ugliness that has consumed me,
taken over the beauty that I used to be?

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Comments about Invisible by David Lomenick

  • (10/30/2005 9:15:00 PM)

    Hi David, it is so annoying be ignored.15th Line 'through' not threw. I am a crap speller too by the way! lol I would give them a taste of their own medicine, but I am a pushover. All the best Tai (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 27, 2005

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 29, 2005


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