Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Invisible Within The Moonlight Comments

Rating: 4.0

As the skies go dim
as evening begins
a soft breeze
of night fall slips across as evening calls
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Shakil Ahmed 14 October 2015

a beautiful poem, well-composed. thanks for sharing. if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments,

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Kay Staley 14 October 2015

Very beautiful. Nice dancing language, and good imagery. Very relatable for the reader, and gives you a feeling that you have been there before; I was the one sitting underneath that tree. I enjoyed this poem to a great degree.

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David Harris

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