Invisible Poem by Laura McDougall

Invisible

Rating: 4.0


I say hello. You don't hear me.
I give a wave. You don't see me.
I make a meal. Your not hungry
I tell a joke. It's not funny
I ask you why. You ignore it.
Am i invisible?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Johnny Golding 05 February 2005

This is really good, best things come in small parcels. Keep on writing! J

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 16 January 2005

wow i really like it, i know what you mean too..sounds like my life. keep writing!

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