Kenzie Lynn

Rookie (December 21st,1990 / Bronson Hospital)

Is Eternity Enough Forever? - Poem by Kenzie Lynn

He said he would love me for eternity.
But is eternity enough forever?
He said he would never leave me agian,
For it was the biggest mistake of his life.
He said he would be there for eternity.
But is eternity enough forever?
Another day ends and a new one begins,
And hes still here.
I asked him how long this would last and he said eternity.
But is eternity enough forever?
Love like life eventually fades
And he said not our love
Our love will last for eternity.
But Is eternity enough forever?

Comments about Is Eternity Enough Forever? by Kenzie Lynn

  • (2/3/2009 5:46:00 AM)

    Can be said this poem is good and even interesting but still i think there is something missing. What i like is the repeating of this curious question - 'Is eternity enough forever? ' (Report) Reply

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  • (4/15/2008 9:26:00 AM)

    you have given eternity a new search for meaning.......good concept and good try. keep up the good work. rgds (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2008 9:37:00 AM)

    cliche enough for catch twenty two? ... hmmm maybe. I'm lost in this prose. Nice flow, nice capture nice enough I suppose. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

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