dong123321 4931

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Is She Coming Back - Poem by dong123321 4931

in autumn,
the tree of leaf fall.
and yet she gone,
my heart lost rhythm of beats,
i can't stop her leaving.
like tree in fall struggle holding back the leaf,
she gone somewhere i never know

i stand here.
were place she left me,
and i waited her like a dead tree.
standing up high that she can find me.
when she back,

and see clearly.
i won't move until she back


i wish someday she back here,
and give me sunshine.
i had being wait here for long time.
earth rotate everyday,
my heart stay the same.
hoping someday she will be back to me

puzzle of my heart miss one piece,
and she the one.
if she back,
my heart will taking back to day were we met
and
we will start over again.
and never left


Comments about Is She Coming Back by dong123321 4931

  • Scotty Dogg (12/28/2011 5:37:00 PM)


    Another good one Dong! I see the tree, man! Good visuals. S. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 27, 2011


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