Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Is There A Lord? Comments

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Take my world away,
Stop all that pray.
Cause theres no need,
Since no-one can watch us read.
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Ailish Canning
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Babatunde Aremu 08 September 2012

The Lord reigns. You are a living testimony

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Robin Bennett 18 July 2012

Even though the poem is a short write, i do believe you managed quite well to deliver the meaning in a well execututed way. I do love the words you choose. When you have only a few short lines certain things are so important and I do think you hit them all wonderfully. I especially love the ending lines. To me the opening is paramount to grabbing the readers attention, which you did. Then the ending you nailed with having the person wanting more. A lovely poem, well constructed and delivered.

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