Thursday, June 14, 2007
Island In The Sand Comments
Rating: ★5.0
You are walking across the desert,
under a hot blazing sun;
you eyes search the horizon
for an oasis somewhere.
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Marci Made
14 June 2007
Again, you've hit the nail on the head with the hammer. You won't get me to argue with this point! I love how you used a mirage as a metaphor! ! ! Great writing....~~~~~love, marci.xo
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12/17/2025 3:49:27 AM # 1.0.0
Another poem with a lot of meaning David...Which is your style...10