It could have been better
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Not that
He is a man not of letters
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My reward lies In the pleasure of my work....nice....a different write..................
When we are given corrections, though it may be a little disheartening, still if we take them in the right sense, we can always move from good to better.... In creative writing, it is not praise or condemnation that matters much, but our own personal satisfaction! Deepak, be assured, you are not a man with a small brain, but someone with high imagination and writing skills! Greatly enjoyed your poem!