Tuesday, June 27, 2006

It’s A Question Of Trust Comments

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You stand in front of me
With your eyes fixed on mine
You reach to take away my mask
I flinch away
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Melissa Koeman
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Georgios Venetopoulos 12 February 2013

Well... Keep him close, he has good reflexes.This poem reminds me of centuries ago, when ethereal dames were fainting and the always eager Lancelot was catching them in mid air before hitting the ground. I liked the piece and the description was of now, vivid and sudden. Your poetry expresses this, and would be nice to receive some criticism from you, too.

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