Monday, December 1, 2008

It’s Only The Beginning Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I look in her eyes
All I see is fear,
All she dose is fear me.....
With my eyes I can see....
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Sarah Baughman
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James Milks 01 December 2008

Very Nice I like the flow of it the urgency the pleading. I felt I needed to rush to the end really great you are starting to develop a style and a voice keep writing.

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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2008

Some run in circles like a dog trying to catch it's tail

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Billy Joe Collins 01 December 2008

great poem fear of beginning over is a great fear.

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Sarah Baughman

Sarah Baughman

Henryetta Oklahoma
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