It's Still A Beautiful Day Poem by Aarushi Chatterjee

It's Still A Beautiful Day

Rating: 4.8


When I peeped through the window at play
I saw it's just another rainy day;
People passed me covered with Macs
Boots hitting the soddy ground with cracks
The earth was full of damp puddles
The sky was a dark ditch-grey.
And still I saw, through the cloudy mist-
The cloud with the silver lining.
Because-you know-I'm sure I saw
The sun-the beautiful sun- was still shining.

I saw the old aunties-white haired women pass by
Grumbling at their muddy shoes
I saw the gentlemen stride past; their faces grave
Still suffering from office blues
I saw the middle aged mothers come by, displeased
Thinking about the washing line-
The clothes all flying loose.
And still I saw-through the drippy wires
The delighted children at play, all smiling,
Because-you know-I'm sure I saw
The sun-the beautiful sun- was still shining.

And though I knew- it had just rained a bit too much
And tempers were on edge
And heard the screams of mothers wild
As the soaked clothes lay- windswept
On the hedge.
And the Earth was all soddy-
Soddy mud
The sky was a dark-ditch grey
And yet I knew
As I pulled back the blinds
It was still-
A beautiful Day.

Wednesday, September 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2020

And still I saw-through the drippy wires The delighted children at play, all smiling, Because-you know-I'm sure I saw The sun-the beautiful sun- was still shining. Beautiful poem. depicting the rainy day with the sunshine and the children playing in love and smile. t ony

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 February 2020

The sky was a dark-ditch grey And yet I knew As I pulled back the blinds It was still- A beautiful Day... always finding the positive in life. very nice poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 August 2019

And still I saw, through the cloudy mist- The cloud with the silver lining. Because-you know-I'm sure I saw The sun-the beautiful sun- was still shining. it was still a beautiful day. inspite of all odds believing in positiveness. a Great poem indeed my dear poet. tony

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 September 2017

And though I knew- it had just rained a bit too much And tempers were on edge And heard the screams of mothers wild As the soaked clothes lay- windswept On the hedge. A beautiful write dear poetess. Thanks for sharing it. 10+++

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Gajanan Mishra 27 September 2017

the beautiful sun shining, good write

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