It's Just..... Poem by Eden Orbista

It's Just.....

Rating: ★5.0


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I closed my eyes in deep thoughts
Just listened to the water and the birds
The lovely view of the lake
It's just fantastic.
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When I opened my eyes
I saw the foliage of the tree
And the bright hue of blue sky
Then the splash of the glaring sun
It's just amazing.
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The dancing shadows of the leaves
It's a wonderful world to live in
Everything seems cuddling the mind
To a wrapped arms around you
It's just heaven.
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The rustling of the leaves
The sound of the bird song
What a great moment of my life
It's just such a delight.


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It's Just.....
Monday, December 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
commune with nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 December 2020

Write comment. Such a beautiful poem, Eden P. O. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kostas Lagos 08 December 2020

This is a little piece of heaven. Splendid poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2020

On the walls a dancing shadows of the leaves It's a wonderful world to live in Everything seems cuddling the mind To a wrapped arms around you It's just heaven beautiful poetic lines. you are one with the nature. pl. write more and present to us. We shall read and comment. tony

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