Danny, James Archer

Rookie (12-05-1990 / Hull)

Its Me! ! - Poem by Danny, James Archer

water forms on a cheek
a moment of silence
cold, wet and bewildering
frost forms, a chokehold

you could have been given a million names.
had death been called hapiness
would it be as wonderful?
equally if you were her would I love you still?

I love you is cliche she says...
so what shall i say?
'your beauty is like.....'
she doesnt have a clue but she
is still encapsulated

Now the truth is set free glass forms
and I see my greiving face, was this my love
despite the current unhappiness I feel,
I owe you more

I wish i didnt feel this way
I wish this wasnt al cliche
but if you fall down and weep
you must know...
'its not you its me! ! '


Comments about Its Me! ! by Danny, James Archer

  • (11/28/2007 3:23:00 AM)

    awww bless ya little cotton socks lol (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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