January Cantata Poem by elysabeth faslund

January Cantata

Rating: 5.0


What more to be done, winter...
What more to be asked...
What are you doing with the
Brown leaves...

Except...
Excercising...exorcising...what
Elements of fire, air, Earth, water
Elementals....

Or, are you the warrior...
Of gods danced with, to, for...
Ornaments of Spring...with all the
Orchestrations

Witholding green, until your blood
Wickens the fields...

Quickens the Child?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 08 January 2008

Good job Elysabeth, an optimistic anticipation of future warmth and growth set to its own internal music.

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... ... 05 January 2008

Good rhythm, very nice, Ely! ! !

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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