Charl JF Cilliers

Gold Star - 5,763 Points (25 January 1941 / Cape Town, South Africa)

Journeys - Poem by Charl JF Cilliers

No longer is there a train
that goes steaming by
and yet I still see the red coals glowing
against the morning sky.

Dreams are longer than journeys,
I know, but I don’t know why.

Just keep seeing the embers glowing
against the morning sky
in dreams that are so much longer
than the journeys that pass me by.

Topic(s) of this poem: journeys

Form: Verse


Comments about Journeys by Charl JF Cilliers

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/12/2015 6:11:00 AM)


    yes we feel sometimes dreams are longer than journeys, beautiful writing, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Charl Cilliers Charl Cilliers (11/12/2015 12:07:00 PM)

    Thank you, Shakil!
    Greetings, Charl

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/12/2015 4:44:00 AM)


    This is very much humorous to observe that dreams are very long like journey. Important sharing done really.10 (Report) Reply

    Charl Cilliers Charl Cilliers (11/12/2015 12:08:00 PM)

    Thank you, Kumarmani!
    Charl

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015



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