Ali Adamson

Jungle... - Poem by Ali Adamson

Mind is like a tree
Questions are leaves
There are thorns on a tree
There are flowers
Leaves become pale in the autumn
Flowers may shed!
... or be snatched! !

Comments about Jungle... by Ali Adamson

  • (4/5/2017 11:51:00 PM)

    I am very moved by this work. You leave undefined the flowers and the thorns. They may represent good and bad. They may represent youth and wisdom....there is a balance of exuberance and optimism, and a hint of maturity and caution. Well done! (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (1/11/2017 5:58:00 AM)

    Nothing is permanent! Like falling leaves and withering petals, life will also come to its eventual decay! Thoughtful write! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (9/1/2016 9:27:00 AM)

    So in a seminar or knowledge center, it must be like a tree full of green :) hahahaha...wonderful idea, mind is like a keeps on growing, renewing and so lively..we can have different aesthatic tree shape by having unique mind! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (1/3/2014 12:25:00 PM)

    when trees are not in order otherwise its is a garden (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin (12/25/2013 2:51:00 PM)

    beauty and ugliness in good and bad
    sin and grace dwelt in a same soul
    the death is the swift taker of all
    in a paleness of times/ share and bright
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/25/2013 11:15:00 AM)

    The poem is an eye opener. Nice structure and a novelty. A new way to look at things. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (12/19/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    this one inspired me to write something on almost the same pattern!
    a good poem!
    thank you Ali bhai!
    (Report) Reply

  • Zoya Khalid (12/17/2013 12:30:00 PM)

    u don't waste a single word and the idea is fully expressed....well that's great...Read ur other poems as well...ur writing style is impressive. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (11/28/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    Wow nice metaphor poem! Great to read. In my urdu i'd say bohot khoob. Pls coment my latest poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 9, 2010

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