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Sunday, July 11, 2010

...............Just A Human Being

Rating: 2.6
I wanted to be a star
but skies couldn't hold me
I tried to be a melodic symphony
but hard to compose me
then i tried to be a smile
but sorrow just failed me.....
then i wanted to be beauty
but arrogance veiled me.....
then i tried to be victory
but stumbled before i could leap......'
Oh how i wished to be freedom
but was surrounded by walls and heaps...
so i just became a human being
because i so well know what pain means........
daffodil tears
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COMMENTS
Aastha Uppal 24 July 2010
the concept is just so powerful in itself that would have made this poem outstand any other one but to the top of it the selection of words, the flow, the emotions everything crisply presented has indeed created a magic in this work of yours.... and these lines: 'so i just became a human being because i so well know what pain means........ ' just say it all... an amazing work.. totally like it
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Saadat Tahir 21 July 2010
brilliant....poem and content....full marks then i tried to be a smile but sorrow just failed me..... then i wanted to be beauty but arrogance veiled me..... and i'll add from ulyses... 'it is not in the destiny of us mortals to demand success...we can do better my friends we can desrve it....' hv great days and fun cheers
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