Just A Little Slice Poem by hidden poet

Just A Little Slice



So much pain
it's blinding me
so much pain
it's crippling me
so much pain and no medicine to heal it
so much pain and no end in sight

Just a little slice
would be so very nice
but one leads to another
and soon there are only cuts
with little skin in sight
blood on the carpet
dizzy in my head

Just a little slice
would be so very nice
but maybe
maybe not tonight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cain XXX 19 June 2010

wow. pretty intense. i liked the idea of voluntarily choosing to undergo pain to distract from a deeper, more unbearable pain. it's a feeling i can relate to. a lot of ppl assume that if you voluntarily hurt yourself, you must need medical help. personally, i think it sometimes keeps people sane. though in excess it is exceedingly dangerous, and it is rather difficult to stop once you've started. but maybe maybe not tonight i applaud the persona's efforts of self control. :) thanks for sharing!

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