Just An Idea Poem by ritty patnaik

Just An Idea



an idea
becomes a seed,
grows roots,
and shoots.
expands
multiplys,
blossoms in profusion,
nurtured in dream,
wet, in the drizzle,
turns into a poem!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 01 October 2009

ALL GREAT THINGS IN OUR HUMAN CIVILIZATION BEGAN WITH JUST AN 'IDEA'! THE CONCEPT OF THE - WHEEL, NUMBERS, ALHABETS etc! THE POEM CONTAINS UNIVERSAL TRUTH AS WELL! SINCE ONE SCHOOL OF PHILOSOPHY CLAIMS THAT THIS WORLD EXISTS ONLY AS 'AN IDEA ' - IN THE MIND OF GOD ! AND WHAT APPERAS TO BE REAL - IS ONLY APPARENT & TRANSIENT! So dear Ritty, your small verse has stirred up the hornet's nest! 10 + -Raj

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Marieta Maglas 16 June 2009

I like this line: ''blossoms in profusion''....nice poem..10+

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