A Legend Poem by ritty patnaik

A Legend

Rating: 5.0


a dot of affection,
is like a wave
in the heart!

you came,
in spite of scoldings.

it was'nt night,
nor it was pitch dark,
it wasn't day break yet,
no noise of the lark.
in such a moment,
two dreams bonded,
became true in a moment
turning into a legend!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 19 June 2009

hi ritty...namaste doing nostalgia today...dont u know its inetrnanational day for displaced persons did one atleast...; -) nice poem cheers

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Barbara Sallee 19 June 2009

Very lovely write. You have a fantastic style! !

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 21 June 2009

lovely...... awesome concept.... a dream...so real.... thank you.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 June 2009

'in such a moment, two dreams bonded, became true in a moment turning into a legend! ' Such a lovely moment, neither night nor day... amazing poem.

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Raj Nandy 04 September 2009

TO ME IT APPEARED LIKE A BEAUTIFUL DREAM SEQUENCE! THANKS! -Raj

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Amazing! You write so well.

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Chitra - 02 July 2009

the fusion of moments...then magic was created....your poem is flawless...simply captivating

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Nooruddeen Mm 29 June 2009

Ritty, Lovely style, good flow. I like this poem very much Tks Nooruddeen

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Ejaz Khan 28 June 2009

A beautiful, magical moment, when a legend was born. I like the way of narration. A great write! I'll surely visit many times and enjoy this beautiful poetry.

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