Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Just Another Just Love Poem Comments

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Without this,
this helpless ability to vent poetics about you,
I would suffer and wither from the inside out,
like a plucked flower decomposing from vein
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Joshua Bantum
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Laurie X3 11 September 2013

Definitely not JUST ANOTHER LOVE POEM! What a beautiful weaving of emotion and metaphors.....A lonely discourse, from player to instrument, from writer to paper, asking of my art, as all men finally do, to display my heart for no other, but you you speak for all in this passage as well. I hope she is able to read your work, it is pure.

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