This is obviously a companion peice to WATERING THE ROSES which was very funny but not as charming as this. The description of the kiss reminds me of the Ted Hughes poem where the lovers put each other together and of the T.S. Eliot taking the bones apart and washing each one so I guess that they are an open referent and are meant to be recognised! If so you made those elements your own and the poem just turns the moment into song...just like that bird!
LOVE DEE DEE
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This is obviously a companion peice to WATERING THE ROSES which was very funny but not as charming as this. The description of the kiss reminds me of the Ted Hughes poem where the lovers put each other together and of the T.S. Eliot taking the bones apart and washing each one so I guess that they are an open referent and are meant to be recognised! If so you made those elements your own and the poem just turns the moment into song...just like that bird! LOVE DEE DEE