Just So Tired Poem by Sylvia Thomas

Just So Tired

Rating: 5.0


Seeing,
Fleeing,

We do what we do everyday,
but we have not much to say,

Slowly,
Gradually,

everything becomes blurry,
because everyone's in a hurry,

then they soon forget
that they are just

too tired.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 28 November 2008

this is simply nice.Love it

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Fil LeBoeuf 23 September 2006

Coming from a poet out of LA I can relate to the hustle-bustle of my hometown north of ya in sf. Well written...especially like the single lines pulled apart from other stanzas. Works very well. Right on! ~Fil

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