Just Stop Poem by Lola Marz

Just Stop

Rating: 5.0


she is
hurt
broken
alone
dead
a lifeless being
a bleeding mess
a zombie
a frozen human
in hell
waiting for someone to save her
she is
real
she has feelings
she has more to her than what you can see
she hides what she feels
she laughs a your jokes
but what she really wants to do is
run
hide
leave this world
never say goodbye
leave a note at the tone
leave a sorry at the tone
leave a message at the tone
leave
leave
leave
Leave her alone
the hate, lies the cuts inside
yeah you have a handle on your life
you say words with out a thought of
could i be the one
could something so weightless
so light
be what ends this teenage girls life?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lola Marx 23 October 2011

thank you all who have commented on this one poem.. every poem i write is from real events.. that have happen to me or to friends of mine.... thank you all once again :)

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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