I saw a girl, a fair beauty,
Whose sunny brightness
Impressed my eyes.
I thought i was confused,
No! i have to be composed.
'Hello, eyes desire? 'my
Words were in slow motion.
'Hello, strange comer, 'her
Words were even slower...
She must be without palaver.
My notion got unleashed,
Truly and carefully,
Convincing her like never before.
A melodious subtle laughter followed,
Like something from my guitar,
Making her display her verdicts.
She is the karachi girl,
Hometown in pakistan, grand daughter
Of a goldmine, in love with me,
A penny boy for nature
And affection's sake.
a melodious laughter followed----i like this line, i see in my mind how she laughed, it is a cute scene, making readers remember the days of their acquaintance with a person they like.NICE ONE.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is soooo good. lOVED it to bits... the way you have expressed your feeling in words....is remakable! ! ! ! ! ++10 best wishes for you