Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,679 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Karma - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Alone I tread through this strange land
Seeking for a helping hand
Fettered by the cares I`ve earned
From lessons I have left unlearned

I`ve spun my fate but spinning still
My destiny, yet to fulfill
Find through lessons I have learned
That peace profound which I have earned


Comments about Karma by Valerie Dohren

  • Govinda Rimal (2/7/2016 9:54:00 AM)


    Alone I tread through this strange land
    Seeking for a helping hand
    Fettered by the cares I`ve earned
    From lessons I have left unlearned

    I`ve spun my fate but spinning still
    My destiny, yet to fulfill
    Find through lessons I have learned
    That peace profound which I have earned. Short and very sweet in taste... Thank you so much
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  • Govinda Rimal (2/7/2016 9:52:00 AM)


    Alone I tread through this strange land
    Seeking for a helping hand
    Fettered by the cares I`ve earned
    From lessons I have left unlearned

    I`ve spun my fate but spinning still
    My destiny, yet to fulfill
    Find through lessons I have learned
    That peace profound which I have earned short and very sweet to read
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  • (11/6/2012 8:53:00 PM)


    This poem is perfection. I really enjoy the way you express emotions in you writing. Thanks Valerie (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2012 11:56:00 AM)


    So as in life after life we continue to reap what we sow; it took you but a few well chosen poetic words, to perfectly decribe the Law of Karma, well done again Valerie... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 11, 2012



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