Thursday, February 23, 2006

Keep Me Safe Comments

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I sit, I wait I stare.
I wish I could be there.
I am so lonely, here right now,
But only you know how,
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jennie o'brien
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Mary Nagy 24 February 2006

Being alone is a fear I think many of us share. (probably what inspires many of us to write) You are a wonderful writer. Sincerely, mary

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Sylvia Spencer 24 February 2006

Your poem tells me what is going on/ your a fine writer Jenny, but belive me life does have a finer side, and by this poem I can tell you have a finer side too. Life is not all doom and gloom, to one that is so talented surely not, cheers Sylvie

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Ndidi Ubogu 23 February 2006

this is a good poem. i like your gentle use of English and the ryhme of the poetry. keep it up........

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coventry, england
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