Kite Poem by Arvie Calimlim

Kite

Rating: 5.0


Alone, wandering
No certainties
Just placing a foot
In front of the other

Woke up with a strange feeling
Thought I needed to be alone
The streets were still dark
Guess it’s still long before dawn

I walked against the cool breeze
Staring into the thin air
Didn’t really notice
I was going somewhere

I stopped and sat down
I wonder what I’m feeling
There’s something I want
Something I am longing

My heart unexpectedly jumped
My thoughts filled with bliss
My blood running energized
My face warmed with the sun’s kiss

I felt the warmth of the early sun
I saw the beauty of the site
I found myself under the tree
The tree where we made our kite

A heart filled with memories
Made strong with a love so true
Though at times it really needed
To take a look back at you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danzen D. 24 July 2009

Reminiscing and looking back...every time I remember some funny things in the past..I unconsciously smile, sometimes, even laugh..looking back at those times not only brighten up our day..but also sweeten our hearts with that same genuine feeling we had long ago...-smiles-

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Stunning composition with lovely metaphor. 10++

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